I'm sure that everybody underwent seperation , at least one time in their life.What did you feel at that time ?.Sometimes seperation impacts more on people than you think.While some feel relaxed when they leave , others feel very sad.There are two main reasons why people seperate from each other.
The first reason of the seperation is lack of love.I think love doesn't and without a reason.There are many problems which cause to finish relation such as deception, telling lies , strong pressure and jealusy.Distrust leads to these problems.If there is distrust between the couple , relation doesn't go on for a long time, because trust is basis of the relation.
Another reason of seperation is external factors such as family and society, and distance between couple.To some extend , it's compulsive leaving.For example , two people love each other, but their families don't want their marriage ,because their families don't come to an agreement or couple's careeres don't fit one another .If their culture , financial , conditions and status don't match , society don't accept their marriage ,too. Society wants the couple to be equal.Because of these factors , people are forced to be seperated.In addition , distance between them is another important problem.Due to their jobs, they must be seperated. As we know , people who are out of sight are out of mind.
In conclusion , people are seperated on a large scale an account of these reasons.Certainly these reasons are very important for your relation, however ; if you build your relation in strong ground , they aren't too much ifluence on your relation.

Hi özgee,Your organization is really good..Content is also good but there is a mistake =>"I think love doesn't and without a reason" in this sentence you should use a verb..Anyway your writing is almost perfect.l like it..see you
ReplyDeleteözge,this essay is really good.I can't say anything because ıt 's perfect.
ReplyDeletedear my first Necla.. your essay is very good.. your grammer and your sentence connection is very good...i hope you will continue your successful writings...
ReplyDeletethank you for your comments:)
ReplyDeleteI liked your essay very much özzge:)your headline is attractive and the way you explained the reasons of seperation is very clear.congrulations:))
ReplyDeletedear özge,
ReplyDeleteyour essay is good but has some problems.
.Sometimes seperation impacts more on people than you think.-sometimes seperatıon impacts on people more than you think.
I think love doesn't and without a reason" in this sentence you should use a verb
youe conclusion is effective thankss..
society don't accept their marriage ,too-doesn't..