Do you imagine you will marry any person from another culture? Do you believe you will understand each other? I can't imagine it. It sounds very unusaul. I don't believe I understand him whose way of living, culture are very different from mine. I insistently consider I can't marry anyone from another country.
Marrying any foreign person is very difficult and inconvenience for me. I have lived for years in Turkish society, and he has lives, too. His way of living doesn’t match mine. According to his values, he wag grown up like me. At that time how can you decide to marry him/her? Now, what happen? Can you change your living style or can he/she change his/her? I think you can't change and vice versa. In addition, there ara many important disagreements. At first, his language is different from ours. Certainly language can be learnt, but, when you learn, disagreements won't end. One of them is family values. As we are Turkish people, we attach importance of family value. In accordance with our tradition, we direct our lifes. When you want your children to grow up with your customs, values, he wants the same.What will your children do? Another disagreement is religion. OF course, you show respect your religions, but sometimes you have serious problems in this subject. While people who live in the same culture can divorce how can you continue your marriage? Even his cuisine is unusual from yours. Meal he likes you may not like on a large scale. There ara many discrepancies in the same region , let alone different country. Some people think love doesn’t have any limit. In contrast, I tihnk it has limits in this matter.
When I consider all the pros and cons of marrying any foreign person. I must say definetely I can't marry anyone from another country.
culture are very different from mine (CULTURE IS..)
ReplyDeleteDEAR FRINED,I COULD CATCH ONE GRAMMATICAL MISTAKE AND ALL THE RULES ARE USED.I LIKED IT VERY MUCH.
Your opinion is succesfully explained and topic sentence is good.I liked it but your conclusion sentence can be developed and can be longed.
ReplyDeletehi ozge,
ReplyDeletel was affected by your essay.Especially,when you ask questions in your essay,I really like it a lot.Conclusion should be longer.There are some grammatical mistakes such as " culture are very different from mine" and "we direct our lifes"..See you.
dear özge,
ReplyDeleteyour introduction is good and effective but body paragraphs contains some mistake.
he has lives-he has lived
he wag grown up like me-he was grpwn up like me.
Now, what happen?-what happens.
we direct our lifes-we direct our lives.
your conclusion is good but very short.