Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Both Impressive and Soothing

There ara two places that are both amusing and relaxing for me. One of them is Denizli which is my hometown, and the other is Bodrum where I always go with my family. At firs glance, they are very different from each other, but also similar in some ways.

In my opinion, Bodrum has the same features like Denizli's. Both of them locate the same region. Their climates are similar. Generally, they are calm. When I go to Bodrum , I feel comfortable as if I was in my hometown, because Bodrum!native people are friendly, and hospitable. They like guests. They try to help you if you have any problem. In addition, there is a cafe which is very sweet. I go there and watch people as I do in Cafe Balcony in Denizli. For me, they are calming. Owners of these cafes are very kind and companionable. You can have a fun time.

In spite of similarities, they have very differences. Firstly, Denizli is a city, but Bodrum is a country. That's why their population is different. Denizli is more crowded than Bodrum. Secondly, Bodrum is coastline. Its marina is very charming and attractive. You can go there to throw your trouble. It gives you peace. Because of being coastline,in summer, population of Bodrum increases. A lot of tourists come to Bodrum. Lastly, especially in these times, it is more gorgeous than Denizli, and I love more it. Whenever you go out, streets are full. You can see many people everytime. Instead of burning in Denizli, you can become cool in Bodrum's deep blue and cool sea.

In conclusion, these are two places that love so much. In winter if you want to activity, you can spend your time in Denizli, in summer vice-versa.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Ozge,
    Your compare and contrast essay is well done.Generally your essays are OK..we can correct some of the grammatical mistakes such as "Because of being coastline,in summer, population of Bodrum increases" l think subjects aren't same...see you.

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  2. Except few grammatical errors it is ok like instead of bodrum native natşve people Bodrum's native people I liked your essay.

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  3. hi özge:))) you told about your favorite places (I like it) there are some gramatical an punctiation mistakes.

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  4. hi özge,
    your body has some gramatical mistakes such as
    Both of them locate the same region-both of them were located in the same region.
    , because Bodrum!native people-Bodrum's native people.
    they have very differences-they have some differences.
    Because of being coastline,in summer, population of Bodrum increasesr they are very different.-subjects are different.
    your conclusion is nearly good. these are two places that love so much-places that I love so much.you should have added some more.

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