Do you also have a problem while going somewher? Do you also make great efforts togo work, school or home ? Nowadays, people who live in Denizli have more encounteredthese situations. Although Denizli, which is my hometown, isn’t such a big city, it has the same problem as the developed cities have. Denizli has had a transport problem for a few years. There are three main reasons of this problem.
The first reason is that number o cars is increasing fabuously day by day. Denizli is developing city. That’s why, while Denizli is improving, more people are coming and settling, which means that there are more many cars in Denizli. There are so many cars that neither you can find a vain place to park your car nor you can drive your car easily on a road. Being a lot of cars leads to heavy traffic that flows slowly. Sometimes you can’t pas seven if the gren lamp burns in three times. As a result of heavy traffic, you can be late your job, and also you can get irritated while you are in traffic problem.
Secondly, Denizli has some roads that don’t have enough quality. These roads were made many years ago regarding population that Denizli had at that time, but as the city is developing, they aren’t sufficient to increasing population. The roads that have poor quality cause to traffic jam. Some of them are too narrow to drive two cars side by side. In addition, people park their cars on the edge of the corner , and you endeavour to pass. While trying to drive, you have waited for a long time to cathc your work or school. In case of being late, you have to set off earlier. Eventually, waiting on traffic can make you angry and tired.
The last reason is infrastructure working. People living in Denizli have suffered from this problem for nearly two years. While you are driving, you encounter the street that is closed because of digging, and so you have to change your way. It leads to lenghten your distance. Of course , this condition is temporary, but it continues to be considered as a problem in traffic until it finishes. Consequently, you can get tired easily until you arrive your job.
In short, if you live in Denizli, suddenly you can come across one of these problems. I think roads and streets should be rebuit considering new population. Additionally, people should be attentive. For example they shouldn’t park their cars on narrow and old roads. Furthermore, parking space should be made to expand streets , so passing is easier and gaining more time makes people happy.

Hi ÖZGE:
ReplyDeleteoRGANIZATION AND CONTENT is good.I like your essay.Conjuction usage is perfect but some of your sentences are diffucult to understand I couldn't read your essay fluently so word usage isn't satisfactory.In some sentences,some words are absent such as "go work, school or home" , "that number o cars ". Anyway, thanks for writing.