Who don’t have a perfect marriage and an ideal partner? Almost every people , especially women, has dreamed them for many years., and women have waited to come their princes having white horse since they were children. Although each women wants to have the same things, they evaluate their ideal husband in diffrent way. I also want a husband who has some special features.
I want a husband who will be loyal forever. For example, any beautiful woman can’t tempt him. He doesn’t pay attention to her even if she is the most beautiful and fascinating woman he has ever seen. We must trust each other so much that ony woman or any man can’t interfere with us, and nobody is a problem for us. He loves my behaviors, ideas, and my heart instead of loving my physical apperance. He must look at me with love, faithfulness. Of course, he must be romantic. For instance, he should bring flowers , or he should buy anything for me at unexpected time. In addition, he shouldn’t forget any special days such as birthdays, our anniversary. In these days , he must make something special or he should bring me to any luxurious restaurant. Sometimes only me and him should go to anywhere and spend time nicely.
I want a husband who is understanding and aware of his responsiblity. When I don’t feel good myself, he must take care of our children, if necessary, he should clean the house and prepare meals for me and our children, and while doing these thing, he shouldn’t complain about them. He also must think life is collective and they shouldn’t be difficult for him. In addition, he should be tolerant. For example, when I am bored with housework or something else and I want to go shopping with my friends, he should show understanding and sometimes he can let me alone. In addition, when I say I am bored and I ask whether we go to the cinema or walk around , he must come with me without any grumble.
I want a husband who is respectful and patient. When something is wrong, he should be patient. He must wait and control his nerves . He shouldn’t speak up and shout at me. In addition , he must respect my mother and father. Even if he can’t get on well with them, he must be respectful as if they were his family. Also, he must support me in every condition, everywhere. He should support my achivements, my job, and he should congratulateme in front of his friends. When he does it , he shouldn’t think he will be henpecked husband. He can be proud of me. Needless to say, he must read boks, and he should be aware of what happen in the world, in our country. He should talk about news.
To sum up, I want a husband with whom I can get on well. We must complete each other . He should be half of me , and I should be half of him, too. He should miss me so much , and we shouldn’t be fed up with each other. As we promise in the marriage, we should love each other in both bad days and nice days. I hope I will find a husband having these features.

I really can't find any mistakes and it is fascinating...
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hi my sweet friend :) I liked your essay ; howeverr I want some gramatical mistakes such as ''Sometimes only me and him should go to anywhere and spend time nicely.''not me and him . It had better be only I and He
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