Sunday, December 19, 2010

-TRANSPORT PROBLEM-(cause and effect essay)

Do you also have a problem while going somewher? Do you also make great efforts togo work, school or home ? Nowadays, people who live in Denizli have more encounteredthese situations. Although Denizli, which is my hometown, isn’t such a big city, it has the same problem as the developed cities have. Denizli has had a transport problem for a few years. There are three main reasons of this problem.
The first reason is that number o cars is increasing fabuously day by day. Denizli is developing city. That’s why, while Denizli is improving, more people are coming and settling, which means that there are more many cars in Denizli. There are so many cars that neither you can find a vain place to park your car nor you can drive your car easily on a road. Being a lot of cars leads to heavy traffic that flows slowly. Sometimes you can’t pas seven if the gren lamp burns in three times. As a result of heavy traffic, you can be late your job, and also you can get irritated while you are in traffic problem.
Secondly, Denizli has some roads that don’t have enough quality. These roads were made many years ago regarding population that Denizli had at that time, but as the city is developing, they aren’t sufficient to increasing population. The roads that have poor quality cause to traffic jam. Some of them are too narrow to drive two cars side by side. In addition, people park their cars on the edge of the corner , and you endeavour to pass. While trying to drive, you have waited for a long time to cathc your work or school. In case of being late, you have to set off earlier. Eventually, waiting on traffic can make you angry and tired.
The last reason is infrastructure working. People living in Denizli have suffered from this problem for nearly two years. While you are driving, you encounter the street that is closed because of digging, and so you have to change your way. It leads to lenghten your distance. Of course , this condition is temporary, but it continues to be considered as a problem in traffic until it finishes. Consequently, you can get tired easily until you arrive your job.
In short, if you live in Denizli, suddenly you can come across one of these problems. I think roads and streets should be rebuit considering new population. Additionally, people should be attentive. For example they shouldn’t park their cars on narrow and old roads. Furthermore, parking space should be made to expand streets , so passing is easier and gaining more time makes people happy.

Sunday, December 12, 2010

My Ideal Husband

Who don’t have a perfect marriage and an ideal partner? Almost every people , especially women, has dreamed them for many years., and women have waited to come their princes having white horse since they were children. Although each women wants to have the same things, they evaluate their ideal husband in diffrent way. I also want a husband who has some special features.
I want a husband who will be loyal forever. For example, any beautiful woman can’t tempt him. He doesn’t pay attention to her even if she is the most beautiful and fascinating woman he has ever seen. We must trust each other so much that ony woman or any man can’t interfere with us, and nobody is a problem for us. He loves my behaviors, ideas, and my heart instead of loving my physical apperance. He must look at me with love, faithfulness. Of course, he must be romantic. For instance, he should bring flowers , or he should buy anything for me at unexpected time. In addition, he shouldn’t forget any special days such as birthdays, our anniversary. In these days , he must make something special or he should bring me to any luxurious restaurant. Sometimes only me and him should go to anywhere and spend time nicely.
I want a husband who is understanding and aware of his responsiblity. When I don’t feel good myself, he must take care of our children, if necessary, he should clean the house and prepare meals for me and our children, and while doing these thing, he shouldn’t complain about them. He also must think life is collective and they shouldn’t be difficult for him. In addition, he should be tolerant. For example, when I am bored with housework or something else and I want to go shopping with my friends, he should show understanding and sometimes he can let me alone. In addition, when I say I am bored and I ask whether we go to the cinema or walk around , he must come with me without any grumble.
I want a husband who is respectful and patient. When something is wrong, he should be patient. He must wait and control his nerves . He shouldn’t speak up and shout at me. In addition , he must respect my mother and father. Even if he can’t get on well with them, he must be respectful as if they were his family. Also, he must support me in every condition, everywhere. He should support my achivements, my job, and he should congratulateme in front of his friends. When he does it , he shouldn’t think he will be henpecked husband. He can be proud of me. Needless to say, he must read boks, and he should be aware of what happen in the world, in our country. He should talk about news.
To sum up, I want a husband with whom I can get on well. We must complete each other . He should be half of me , and I should be half of him, too. He should miss me so much , and we shouldn’t be fed up with each other. As we promise in the marriage, we should love each other in both bad days and nice days. I hope I will find a husband having these features.

Monday, November 1, 2010

A HAIRLINE BETWEEN RELIGION AND RESPONSIBILITY--opinion essay-

Can you imagine that there is a mother who disregards her child’s health beacuse of
her religion? Until I read this event, I hand’t imagined that it coul be. When I learnt it, not only I was so upset but also I was really shocked even if I’m not either a mother or a father.That's why I think the court’s decision is right witihout any doubt.
In my opinion, being parents require many responsilibities. One of the most important responsibilities is caring about children’s health. Unlike the Hermansons, parent should think firstly their children’s health instead of their religion. For example, if I were a mother , and my daughter were sick , I would try to do everything, and first of all I would tahe care of my child rahter than my belief that includes only praying for God, and refusing any medicine. I remember that when I was a child and sick, my mother tried to find anything to cure my illness, and not only she took me to the doctor but also she used nonconventional medical treatment that includes alternative medicine and praying for God; in contrast, the Hermansons
believed prayer was the most effective treatment, and they trusted only prayer as not accepting to give medicine to Amy, but she couldn’t be saved, in this way I support the court’s judgement, because the parents didn’t realize their responsibility.
In addition to them, I consider that children have a right to grow up healthy. In spite of this right, Amy didn’t have any choise , because her parent decided to try to heal her with prayer rather than take her to any doctor. At the end of it, she died without any conventional medicine. How can it be acceptable? How can it be defensable? However, the Hermansons defended themselves as saying that they had a right to choose their religion, and biring their child up according to it, but they forgot they just did something which had to be required by Christian Science. Although they didn’t fulfill their duty being to protect her from death by
supplying medicine, they took her right from Amy
There is no reason to explain it. I back up the cour’s sentence sincerely. The Hermansons didn’t accept ant conventional treatment , thus openly they looked on her death. Despite having opportunity to heal her , they refused it and allowed her death. I hope it will be an example for parents to prevent other death due to only religious principles.

Saturday, October 23, 2010

compare and contrast paragraph about two films

The Miracle Worker and Angela’s Ashes have several things in common, but also there are some major difference. Firstly, their themes include the difficulties of the life, and also both are dramatic films which quote from Helen Keller and Frank McCourt’s true lives. Secondly, both Helen and Frank are perseverance people, in this way they can overcome obstacles. In addition, these films show that whatever we encounter , we should be stubborn to resist difficulties. In spite of these similarities, those two films are different from each other. For example, Helen is blind and deaf, but Frank doesn’t have any physical disability. When compared in this respect, Helen’s condition is more regrettable than Frank's condition, but in terms of pecuniary, Frank is unluckier than Helen, because he lives in misery and always struggles with poverty. In summary, even though they are impressive films, I am more influenced by Angela’s Ashes on account of his miserable life and its effective showing.

Friday, May 21, 2010

My Pretty Hometown -( revised descriptive essay)-

I don’t know whether you come to Denizli or not.If you don’t come , I recommend you to come here. Denizli which is located west of Turkey isn’t a very big city. Generally, Denizli is famous for its cocks that crow long time, and it is known as a textile city. In addition, Denizli has many charming places and thingh that become integrated to Denizli.
One of the charming places is ”Pamukkale”. There ara travertines whose colors are snow-white. They look so glorious that when people see them once, they won’t forget their apperance. Pamukkale has hot water which heals many diseases such as rheumatism, skin diseases. There is special mud that is known as healing. Although it is beneficial, it smells very bad. In Pamukkale, there are many chic hotels to put you up. They are so comfortable that you feel yourselves as e queen or king. Windows of these hotels open amazing beauty of Pamukkale.If you go to Pamukkale , I'm sure that you enjoy a lot.Another lovely place is “Çamlık”. It is well known in Denizli. When you go there, you breathe fresh air and see a lot of tall trees which facilitate people to have a picnic especially in hot summer days. Everywhere is gren which seems impressive. There are tables that are made from wood. If you want, you can climb big Çamlık Mountain.I must tell about “İncilipınar Park”. People say it is the biggest park of Aegean Region. It’s so charming. It has a lake which is artificial. In the lake there are white and cute ducks. While people have a chat as sitting on benchets , ducks sound very pretty. Especially at nights, its illumination is attractive.Lake’s harmony with light deserves to be seen.As I said before, cocks are symbol of Denizli. In addition, Denizli is famous for dust and women. Generally in autumn, your eyes can turn red. Sometimes, you can’t walk because of wing and dust. Actually, Denizli’s women are beautiful. They have attractiveness. They are really pretty women. With their speech, behaviours, looks and positions, they arouse your interst.
To sum up, Denizli is a very enjoyable city with its places, hospitable people who have very sweet accent, and nice habits. I advise you to came here. If you come, you won’t regret. Denizli is waiting you with the whole beauty.

Thursday, May 20, 2010

Causes of Stress Among Women

Most men think that women are always under stres, but they generally don’t think why it happens. Nowadays, stres has been popular among people.Most people especially women live as being under stres. When we ask why women are more susceptibility to be stres than men, there are three major reasons which lead to stres in women’s lifes.
One of the reasons is difficulties of houseworks and family troubles. At first women are mother so they should have many responsibilities on their shoulders. Being mother means dealing with every problem.They must be powerful.They must care about their children and husbands and houseworks, but sometimes they don’t have power enough to cope with these difficulties. Their efforts run out at the end of it. While they are looking after their children , they can’t do other things which are compulsory to be done , but they can’t struggle against them at the same time, so it can cause to stres to women. It is really difficult to deal with them at the same time for every body , of course it isn’t also easy for women.
Another reason is their hormones. Everybody knows sometimes women’s hormones change in their special days in every mounth. Their fluctuatıng hormones lead to be tension. Their moods alter easily at that time when they can behave like being depressed. For example while they are pregnant it can also happen. They can cry easily or they can be angry or aggressive suddenly. Their behaviors are diffferent from in normal lifes.
The last reason is hardship of their jobs. In addition to these stressful events, their jobs also lead to stres, because job means a stressful and tiresome thing, so people who work always come across many difficulties. Works don’t go like clockwork everytime, therefore contrariety can happen suddenly.While women experience these challenging things in their house , they also try to cope with their job’s hardship.Of course human being can’t fight with all of them an the same time.
All of the reasons cause to have stres to women. Certanly this stres effects to women extremely. Instead of increasing the stres, men try to decrease it. The less stress women have the happier life is for both men adn women.

Preparations Until Marriage

When the couple decides to marry, many preparations begin with excitement. Especially in Turkish culture it happens like that. Turkish culture has colourful and enjoyable traditions which continue until marriage preparations. We generally think that they are our cutoms and they have been realized for many years , so they must be continued. Until people start to wedding preparation, there are three main parts which should be done.
At first, after the couple loves each other and decides to marry , their families make a decision about meeting with rush and big arrangements. Boy’s family sets out but before they arrive , they buy flowers and chocolate so that eating sweet things cause to speak pleasantly. While they do these things, girl’s family also makes such as cleaning their house. At the same time both families wear smart clothes. When they arrive the house, people who are hosts welcome to them sincerely. While they are sitting and talking, the girl makes Turkish coffee. The coffee which is made to boy includes salt and bitter.At first glance, it seems nonsense, but actually it is meaningful. If the boy drinks it saying nothing , it means the boy is always with her despite trouble and pain. After that, the boy’s father says to girl’s father we want his girl with God’s order and prophet’s utterance, then the girl’s father says children love each other so they don’t have any word and they give their daughter.
The second part of it is engagement but until engagement, there are also many preparations, Firstly, the boy and his family make up bundle that includes pyjamas, dress and slipper for the girl, dress or scarf for her mother, shirt for her father. When they are making them, the girl’s family cooks delicious meals like tart and pie. Then both of the families wear their smart clothes again. The engagement is also made in the girl’s house where families and relatives have a chat and eat these meals during this time. Later any member of the families who is always the oldest person of the families wears rings to the couple wanting that their relation continues forever.
The last part is to g oto the boy’s house. After the boy’s family’s visiting, the family members of the girl go to their house. It is asked why it happens. It is realized to bring to him a bundle. Before they go there, they arrange a bundle which includes the similar things in her bundle. They give the bundle. The only thing which remains is waiting for wedding day.
When these things happen, people get into a flap and they are excited. It is said that although they require a lot of preparations which are so tiresome , they are wonderful feelings that should be experienced.